Amber Howe: I liked the question you presented in your project. What is love really? This is a very interesting concept, and I think you elaborated on it really well. The only things I would change would be very nit picky. One set of text was green I believe, and that color stodd out very harshly from the background. It kind of hurt my eyes. The only other thing would be that you spelled "away" as "avay." Again, pretty minor stuff.
Deanna Brown: I liked that you wanted to deviate from the normal idea of raising a child. So many people get caught up in reading the books, that they forget what they're really doing. I thought your presentation seemed a bit disorganized though. It was kind of all over the place. If you could make your main point a bit more concrete, and maybe separate the different "voices" more then it would be a really great project.
Kelsey Shapiro: I love music, and I love this presentation. The color tone of the pictures really enhanced them for me, and I think your argument was really sound. I think it's great that you made light of the fact that when people listen to a certain kind of music, they begin to describe themselves using the qualities associated with that type of music.
Estelle Reidler: I think I liked this project, although I felt that you jumped from one picture to the next really quickly, making it hard to absorb what was going on. I like that you took all your own photos, and that you used a really great poem.
Charlotte Moyer: This presentation really resonated with me. I don't write many stories, but I do write music. It can be incredibly frustrating to have writer's block, and I find that I tend to follow the same techniques you used. This was a really solid project, and I don't know what I would change about it.
Jenny Mascaro: I didn't really understand this presentation. I couldn't see any text, ever. And many of the pictures went by too quickly to get a feel for what they were trying to say. There was very little overall explanation as well. I think the concept was a good one, an alternate perspective on the titanic story, but it wasn't very well executed.
Deanna Brown: I liked that you wanted to deviate from the normal idea of raising a child. So many people get caught up in reading the books, that they forget what they're really doing. I thought your presentation seemed a bit disorganized though. It was kind of all over the place. If you could make your main point a bit more concrete, and maybe separate the different "voices" more then it would be a really great project.
Kelsey Shapiro: I love music, and I love this presentation. The color tone of the pictures really enhanced them for me, and I think your argument was really sound. I think it's great that you made light of the fact that when people listen to a certain kind of music, they begin to describe themselves using the qualities associated with that type of music.
Estelle Reidler: I think I liked this project, although I felt that you jumped from one picture to the next really quickly, making it hard to absorb what was going on. I like that you took all your own photos, and that you used a really great poem.
Charlotte Moyer: This presentation really resonated with me. I don't write many stories, but I do write music. It can be incredibly frustrating to have writer's block, and I find that I tend to follow the same techniques you used. This was a really solid project, and I don't know what I would change about it.
Jenny Mascaro: I didn't really understand this presentation. I couldn't see any text, ever. And many of the pictures went by too quickly to get a feel for what they were trying to say. There was very little overall explanation as well. I think the concept was a good one, an alternate perspective on the titanic story, but it wasn't very well executed.